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제목 | Text messaging | 등록일 | 2014-07-22 |
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내용 | These days, many people are used to texting compared to calling people. It is easier to text people because everyone is busy these days. I use Kakaotalk instead of using mobile text message when I want to send message to people. It is for free and more convenient to text people to send out announcements. Also it is easier to talk with many people at once through texting so I think it is better than calling. The downside to texting is that we cannot hear the other person’s voice or tone, so some texts can be misinterpreted. One time, I told someone to call me if she can. She was offended because it seemed like I was commanding her to call me. There was a big miscommunication because of a short text message with no emotion. That is the problem with text messages because the reader can read it in a different tone than what the writer intended. Even though there are slight miscommunications, I still like using text messages because they are more convenient than calls. | ||
담당강사 | Chloe1 | 등록일 | 2014-07-24 |
첨삭 내용 | Hello Jake! I definitely agree with you. Here are your corrections. ^_^ These days, many people are used to texting compared to calling people. It is easier to text people because everyone is busy these days. I use Kakaotalk instead of using mobile text messaging when I want to send messages to people. It is for free and more convenient than texting people using text messaging to send out announcements. Also, it is easier to talk with a lot of people at once when you text so I think it is better than calling. The downside of texting is that we cannot hear the other person’s voice or tone, so some texts can be misinterpreted. One time, I told someone to call me if she can. She was offended because it seemed like I was commanding her to call me. There was a big misunderstanding because of a short text message with no emotion. That is the problem with text messages because the reader can read it in a different tone than what the writer intended. Even though, there are slight miscommunications, I still like using text messages because they are more convenient than calls. |