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| 제목 | my neighbors | 등록일 | 2014-07-22 |
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| 내용 | I live in an apartment complex. The neighbors who i know are a few. I usually come across my neighbors who live next door and same building in the elevator. We only exchange nods when we meet. I'm not really close to my neighbors. But i know the neighbors who live next door. The husband and the wife are an office worker and They are young. They work for 삼성 like me but we sometimes meet in the front of the door. Because we have the different working time. My neighbors are not sociable, so they say only hello to me when we come across. Ah, anyway the neighbors who talk with me live in the upstairs. The husband is a taxi driver and the wife is a housewife. Not long ago, we talked about a private taxi driver license. He is older than me, but he is very kind. It will be a good opportunity to get to know that better. |
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| 담당강사 | Riz | 등록일 | 2014-07-22 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I live in an apartment complex.- good The neighbors who i know are a few. I usually come across my to my neighbors who live next door and same building in the elevator. We only exchange nods when we meet.- good I'm not really close to my neighbors.- good But i know the neighbors who live next door. Good The husband and They work for 삼성 like me but we sometimes meet in Because we have My neighbors are not sociable, so they say only hello to me when we come across.- Good Ah, anyway the neighbors who talk with me live The husband is a taxi driver and the wife is a housewife- Good Not long ago, we talked about a private taxi driver license. - Good He is older than me, but he is very kind.- Good It will be a good opportunity to get to know
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