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| 제목 | Spending time with family members in my house.. | 등록일 | 2014-07-25 |
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| 내용 | As you know, I always place my family above anything else. So, I try to spend time with my family as often as I can. I like to spend all of the time with my family after working. We mostly spend our time together watching TV, eating some refreshments and chatting. The subject of conversation is different every time. We talk about things such as TV programs, sports and movies. If I don’t have any special plans on the weekend, I normally spend time at home. I use Saturday mornings to catch up on some sleep. I sleep in until at least 9 o’clock. In the afternoon, I typically go play some tennis with my sons at a nearby tennis court. After a few games, we often go to grab a bite together. Every Sunday morning, I go hiking with my wife on a mountain. I really enjoy hiking as it is great exercise. I think that spending time together as a family is very important. Families need this time to bond and understand each other better. |
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| 담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-07-25 |
| 첨삭 내용 | As you know, I always place my family above anything else. That's why I try to spend as much time with them as I can. I like to spend all the time I left after work with my family. We usually spend time watching TV, eating and talking. We talk about different things such as TV programs, sports and movies. If I don't have any plans on weekend I just stay at home. I sleep longer on Saturday morning at least until 9AM. In the afternoon I usually play tennis with my sons at the nearby court. After a few games, we would grab a bite at some place. Every Sunday morning I go hiking with my wife. I really enjoy hiking because it's also a good exercise. I think spending time with family is very important. Family needs time to bond to understand each other better. |
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