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제목 | My weekend | 등록일 | 2014-07-25 |
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내용 | I usually stay at home on weekends even though I like hanging out. Because my daughter is third-year of high school. It is difficult to entered in University in korea and She have to study hard. So i have to stay beside her on weekends. Because i am sorry to her, if i hang out alone for me. But I regularly go to big supermarket with my wife on weekends. This time is very good for me. I can enjoy shopping and have a nice meal. And sometimes, I go to temple near my home. I believe in Buddha. I like going to temple and praying for happiness of my family. After i go and get back there, i always feel great. |
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담당강사 | Riz | 등록일 | 2014-07-25 |
첨삭 내용 | I usually stay at home on weekends even though I like hanging out. -good Because my daughter is third-year of high school. good It is difficult to enter So i have to stay beside her on weekends. - good Because i am sorry to her, if i hang out alone for me.- good But I regularly go to big supermarket with my wife on weekend- good This I can enjoy shopping and have a nice meal. good And sometimes, I go to the temple near my home. I believe in Buddha.- I like going to temple and praying for happiness of my family. After i go and get back there, i always feel great.- good
Hi There, Keep up the good work |