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제목 | self introduction other version 2 | 등록일 | 2014-07-26 |
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내용 | Personally, I like watching movies and traveling. So, I watch most of new release movies. Among them, I like action movies including Transformer. Traveling is another that I like. It helps me take all the stress out and relaxed, while enjoying the nature and observing cultural differences where international. Not to mention it broadens my empirical knowledge of the places that I visit. | ||
담당강사 | Sandy2 | 등록일 | 2014-07-28 |
첨삭 내용 | Personally, I like watching movies and traveling. It helps me take all the stress out and relaxed, while enjoying the nature and observing cultural differences where international. [Comment] Hi Daniel! Watching a movie is one of the hobbies people enjoy. Satisfying your eyes is always a good way to relax. For entertainment and to learn. Lots of times movies teach you good morals or make you feel happier and inspire you. And, traveling helps you appreciate the wonders of the world. It's a way to know the different cultures and meet new people. Keep safe! -T. Sandy-
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