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제목 | traveling experience internationally! | 등록일 | 2014-07-27 |
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내용 | Today, I want to tell you about traveling experience internationally. I have experiences that I went to an other contries like India, Cambodia, Japan, Taiwan. I went to India and Cambodia for volunteer work and I traveled Japan and Taiwan alon. It was very good memory for me. one of the best contry where I have been is in the India. I don't forget smile of children. They lived not good enviroment. But They look like happinest in the world because always with smile. I didn't satisfy my life at that time, although I have a lot of things. They did't get many things, they can enjoy their life and afford whatever. I was shamed. when I came back to Korea, the experience became positive energy. So, after 2 years, I would go to Cambodia for vorunteer work. |
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담당강사 | Belle | 등록일 | 2014-07-28 |
첨삭 내용 | Today, I want to tell you about my traveling experience internationally. I have experiences that I went to I went to India and Cambodia for volunteer worked and I traveled Japan and Taiwan alone. It was very good I They lived in a not good enviroment. But They look I didn't satisfy my life at that time, although I have a lot of things. They did't get many things, they can enjoy their life and afford whatever. I was shamed. when I came back to Korea, the experienced became positive energy. So, after 2 years, I would go to Cambodia for |