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제목 | let's go jogging with my friend | 등록일 | 2014-07-28 |
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내용 | Hello Bree? This is Jason. I'm calling to ask you to jog with me this Saturday morning. Do you have any plan for that time? I hope you don’t. As we talked before, we definitely need an exercise. Do you have any suitable clothes and shoes for jogging? As you know, we don't need a fancy clothes and shoes. I usually go to jog at my university ground, but if you know another place in mind, please tell me about it. And do you have any other people whom you want to join? I'm happy to exercise together. And the most important question, what about having a breakfast together after jogging? I know a very nice breakfast café where you will love. Why don't we go together? As soon as you check my message, call me back. Bye. |
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담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-07-29 |
첨삭 내용 | Hello, Bree. This is Jason. I called just to ask you to go jogging with me this Saturday morning. Do you have any plans that time? I hope you don't. Just like what we talked about before, we definitely need to exercise. Do you have proper attire for jogging? As you know, we don't really need fancy clothings and shoes. I usually go jogging around my university campus. But if you have another place in mind, please let me know. And is there anybody else you'd like to join us? I would be very glad to go jogging with many people. And most importantly, what do you think about having breakfast after jogging? I know a place where they serve good breakfast and coffee. I'm sure you will love it. Why don't we go together? Please call me back as soon as you receive this message. Bye. |