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| 제목 | Traveling Internationaly | 등록일 | 2014-07-29 |
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| 내용 | I want to tell you about traveling experienced internationaly following yester day. 3months ago, I went to Taiwan. I couldn't help going there alone, because my close friends was working during week. The reason why I made plan to go Taiwan, I don't have enough time and Taiwan is close from Korea. There are a lot of good place like palace, 101 building, national museum and so on. one of the best things is Taiwanese who is really kind. When I ask how can I get destination, They explained it kindly and even brought me to there. one time, I asked someone But, He was not a Taiwanese. He was a Thailander!! We began chatting and found we had in common. We spent an enjoyable time during taking the bus. I felt as if we had known each other for a while. I did get his SNS account. Now we keep in touch regularly. I'm planning to go to Thailand this winter to meet him. |
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| 담당강사 | Belle | 등록일 | 2014-07-31 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I want to tell you about traveling experienced internationaly following 3months ago, I went to Taiwan. I couldn't help going there alone, because my close friends The reason why I made plan to go to Taiwan, I don't have enough time, and Taiwan is close from Korea. There are
When I ask how can I get
We began chatting and found we had in common. We spent an enjoyable time during taking the bus. I felt as if we had known each other for a Now, we keep in touch regularly. I'm planning to go to Thailand this winter to meet him. |
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