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제목 Let me introduce my favorite restaurant today! 등록일 2014-07-29
내용 Let me introduce my favorite restaurant today!
I almost spend time in company and with my co-workers. So, we are often have lunch and dinner.
It is important to stisfy almost person more than only myself.
We have to chooce the restaurant which everyone like to.
Although It is very difficult to choose that, We fortunately like to eat chiness food.
The rastaurant called 'Chingtien' in chaina language is always crowded with many customers
because, we don't have a lot of time at lunch, It is located close from work plase as well as,
there have delicious food such as jjajangmyeon, jjambbong, Tangsuyook etc.
It is never sick and tired, we often try it!
If you did'n go ther, I want to recomment going to there!
담당강사 Belle 등록일 2014-08-19
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Let me introduce my favorite restaurant today!

I almost spend my time in company and with my co-workers.

>I almost spend time in the company and with my co-workers. So, we are often having lunch and dinner.

So, we are often have eat lunch and dinner.

It is important to stisfy satisfy almost most person more rather than only myself.yourself

>It is important to satisfy almost most people rather than yourself

We have to chooce choose the a restaurant which everyone likes to.

Although It is very difficult to choose that, We fortunately like agreed to eat chiness chinese foods.

The rastaurant called 'Chingtien' in chaina Chinese language is always crowded with many customers because we don't have a lot of time at for lunch, .It is located close from my work plase place as well as, there have are lots of delicious foods such as jjajangmyeon, jjambbong, Tangsuyook etc.

It is never sick and tired, we often try it! If you did'nt go there, .I want to will recomment recommend going to to eat there!

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