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제목 | Let me introduce my favorite restaurant today! | 등록일 | 2014-07-29 |
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내용 | Let me introduce my favorite restaurant today! I almost spend time in company and with my co-workers. So, we are often have lunch and dinner. It is important to stisfy almost person more than only myself. We have to chooce the restaurant which everyone like to. Although It is very difficult to choose that, We fortunately like to eat chiness food. The rastaurant called 'Chingtien' in chaina language is always crowded with many customers because, we don't have a lot of time at lunch, It is located close from work plase as well as, there have delicious food such as jjajangmyeon, jjambbong, Tangsuyook etc. It is never sick and tired, we often try it! If you did'n go ther, I want to recomment going to there! |
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담당강사 | Belle | 등록일 | 2014-08-19 |
첨삭 내용 | Let me introduce my favorite restaurant today! I almost spend my time in company and with my co-workers. >I almost spend time in the company and with my co-workers. So, we are often having lunch and dinner. So, we are often have eat lunch and dinner. It is important to >It is important to satisfy almost most people rather than yourself We have to Although It is very difficult to choose that, We The rastaurant called 'Chingtien' in It is never sick and tired, we often try it! If you did'nt go there, .I |