Hi there Jack!

  I was glad that you were able to write something here again. I was glad that you told me your favorite game. Please see the following corrections:

Your Composition:

Hi teacher Tara. I really nice to hear your voice again. Thank you for teaching again. If you don't mind, I try to make some sentences about playing a game that we treated as today's topic in the morning. I can't say that I often to play game these days. But I try to do it whenever I have a time. Because It makes me relieve my stress and refresh my mind. I usally play game at the living-room or my room. Because there are my computer and game garget. What I like most about the game garget is Play-station came from Japan. I offeres very fatastic graphic performance. It is really helpful to play game which make me more enjoyable. For those of the reasons, I like to play game in my house. Thanks! Sincerly yours.

Revised:

Hi teacher Tara!

  It is really nice to hear your voice again. Thank you for teaching again. If you don't mind, I will try to make some sentences about playing a game which is our topic this morning. I can't say that I often to play game these days, but I try to do it whenever I have time. It relieves my stress and refreshes my mind. I usually play games in the living-room or in my room because my computer and game gadgets are there. My favorite game gadget is the Play-station which came from Japan. It offers very fantastic graphic performance. It is really helpful to play game to be more enjoyable. For those reasons, I like to play game in my house. Thanks! 

Sincerely yours,

Jack

 Please remember that it is not important to make sentences longer. Just make it simple and understandable. You have to be careful of the use of tenses of verbs and some conjunctions. I know you can do better. Have a great day!