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제목 | self introdution | 등록일 | 2014-08-04 |
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내용 | my name is JI KYOUNG, english name is SARAH i'm twenti-night years old i work for a samsung sds my department is safety-enviroment part i was born is CHANGWON now i live in SEOUL, i have lived there ten month there are four member in my family father, mother, brother and me my mother used to piano teather in academy but now housewife i'm intersting in finding new resturance and bar one of my favorite things to do on weekends is visiting trendy resturance and bar and i allso loke to travel a lot i try to travel abroad once a year. |
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담당강사 | Faith | 등록일 | 2014-08-05 |
첨삭 내용 | My name is JI KYOUNG. My English name is SARAH. I'm twenti-night years old and I work for Hi Sera! When writing a sentence you should always capitalize the letter I, especially if you are going to use this as the first word in your sentence and check on the right punctuation that you're going to use in your sentence. Teacher Faith |