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제목 | Jogging | 등록일 | 2014-08-04 |
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내용 | As far as I remember, It may a couple of years ago. I started have a jogging. Because my doctor recommended it to reduce the depression symtomps. It was very helpful to relieve my stress and refresh my mind. I used to have a jogging twice a week. When I first joged, 30min of jogging was very difficult, but after serveral times of trying I adopt about it and continued to it for about 1hour. But Thesedays I don't do that. Becuase I feel exhausted after jogging or knee-pain. So I changed my mind to ride a bicycle. It is very helpful to reduce my back-pain. and I'd like to ride a bicycle at the bike-track in the park which is located in near my house. It's my story about jogging and why I changed my mind. That's all~ |
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담당강사 | Kat | 등록일 | 2014-08-04 |
첨삭 내용 | As far as I remember, It may a couple of years ago. - As far as I remember, I started have a jogging. - I started Because my doctor recommended it to reduce the depression symtomps. - Because my doctor recommended it to reduce the depression symptoms It was very helpful to relieve my stress and refresh my mind. - Good Sentence I used to have a jogging twice a week. - I used to go When I first joged, 30min of jogging was very difficult, - When I first jogged, 30mins of jogging was very difficult, but after serveral times of trying I adopt about it and continued to it for about 1hour. - but after serveral times of trying I adopted But Thesedays I don't do that. Becuase I feel exhausted after jogging or knee-pain. - But So I changed my mind to ride a bicycle. - So, I changed my mind It is very helpful to reduce my back-pain. - Good Sentence I'd like to ride a bicycle at the bike-track in the park which is located in near my house. - Good Sentence It's my story about jogging and why I changed my mind. That's all~ - |