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| 제목 | My introduction | 등록일 | 2014-02-04 |
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| 내용 | My name is samgmoon Han, english name is david han. I was born on 21 jan 1970 and I'm in my mid 40's. I Work as computer manager at samsung company. I have been for 21 years since entering this company so I specialize in computer security. I usually do very calmy and easy-going in my workplace. but when I play sports, I change very active-person. My hobby is playing badminton and it is very hard to do but I think it is the funnest sports in the world. I am the youngest in my family and I have one elder brother. |
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| 담당강사 | Faith2 | 등록일 | 2014-02-04 |
| 첨삭 내용 | My name is samgmoon Han.My English name is David Han. I was born on the 21st of January, year 1970 and I'm in my mid 40's. I work as a computer manager at samsung company. I have been working for my company for 21 years now so I specialized in computer security. I usually work calmy and an easy-going person in my workplace, but when I play sports, I change into a very active-person. My hobby is playing badminton and it is very hard to do it but I think it is the funniest sports in the world. I am the youngest in my family and I have one elder brother. | ||