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제목 | Today is... | 등록일 | 2014-08-06 |
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내용 | Today is wendsday which is middle of workday. Directly, Weekend be left little hour. I met with my group manager to report weekly job for an hour. Today also finish work at 8 pm. I had to work for 12 hour. i was tired but as i will hold out two day, weekend will be. cheer up. |
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담당강사 | Monica | 등록일 | 2014-08-08 |
첨삭 내용 | [CORRECTION] Today is wednsday which is middle of workday. -> Today is Wednesday which means we are in the middle of the weekday Directly, Weekend be left little hour. I met with my group manager to report weekly job for an hour. -> Today also finish work at 8 pm. -> I had to work for 12 hour. -> I had to work for twelve hours. i was tired but as i will hold out two day, weekend will be. cheer up. -> I
[COMMENT] Hi Moon! Thank you for sharing this composition! This is my first time receiving a text like this and I am really glad to have it. I hope you had a great time meeting with your manager! ^_^ Twelve hours of work is not easy but I know that you will get through this. Just like you, I am pretty much excited for this coming weekend. Let us finish this day and have some fun! Advance Happy Weekend! ^_^ -Monica
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