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제목 Today is... 등록일 2014-08-06
내용 Today is wendsday which is middle of workday.
Directly, Weekend be left little hour.
I met with my group manager to report weekly job for an hour.
Today also finish work at 8 pm.
I had to work for 12 hour.
i was tired but as i will hold out two day, weekend will be.
cheer up.
담당강사 Monica 등록일 2014-08-08
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[CORRECTION]

Today is wednsday which is middle of workday.

-> Today is Wednesday which means we are in the middle of the weekday workday.

Directly, Weekend be left little hour. I met with my group manager to report weekly job for an hour.

->Directly, Weekend be left little hour is coming. I met with my group manager  for an hour to report about my weekly job.

Today also finish work at 8 pm.

-> Today also I finished working at 8 PM.

I had to work for 12 hour.

-> I had to work for twelve hours.

i was tired but as i will hold out two day, weekend will be. cheer up.

-> I was am tired but  as I  will  am still holding out  up two day  because weekend will be is coming after two daysCheer up.

 

[COMMENT]

Hi Moon! Thank you for sharing this composition!

This is my first time receiving a text like this and I am really glad to have it.

I hope you had a great time meeting with your manager! ^_^

Twelve hours of work is not easy but I know that you will get through this.

Just like you, I am pretty much excited for this coming weekend. Let us finish this day and have some fun!

Advance Happy Weekend! ^_^

-Monica

 

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