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제목 about my lunchtime 등록일 2014-02-05
내용 When I have my lunchtime I usually go to the cafeteria of the compony with co-workers.
That cafeteria serves variety of meals - around 10 different kinds of choice they have- with unbeleavablely cheap price.
My office located right close to Gang-Nam Station , so It's very hard to find those great meal with cheap price.
So all of my co-workers and I realy enjoying eating at there.

Even thoug we have to walk 10 min. to get the cafeteria , there's no dougt to not having lunch at there.
The only thing I feel bad is my lunchtime is not too long. It's only an hour.
But still me and my co-workers have a great time. I think lunchtime is important to get to know about each others by talking their worlds and share our time.
담당강사 Ned 등록일 2014-02-06
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I usually go to the cafeteria of our company with my co-workers. That cafeteria serves variety of meals. Around 10 different kinds of choices with unbelievable cheap price. My office is located right close to Gang-Nam Station that's why It's very hard to find great meals with cheap price. All of my co-workers and I really enjoy eating there. Even though we have to walk 10 mins. to get to the cafeteria , there's no doubt not to have lunch there. The only thing I feel bad about is that my lunchtime is not too long. It's only an hour. But still, me and my co-workers always have a great time. I think lunchtime is important to get to know about each other by talking about their worlds and share our time.

 

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