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제목 | Watching Sports! | 등록일 | 2014-08-11 |
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내용 | Audrey, are you check Korean MLB player Hyun-Jin Ryu ? Also, there is another player in MLB. He's name is Shin-Soo Choo. And, This is my script. I wrote them but can't read in our class. I try to speak my story. but it is a little hard. When I was high school, I watched my first baseball game. My high school has a baseball team. So, some of my classmates are baseball player. In KOREA, there is the best famous high school baseball cup, the name of President cup. In the high school baseball season, Our team won the game continuously and went to the final match. When the final match, all of the students went to the baseball park to cheer for our team. My friends and I was very excited and the match was very fun. My classmate hit the homerun and our team won the game and got a Cup. Also, He got a mvp. I felt that the cheering is fun. After my first time to watch baseball game, I go to the baseball park for my favorite baseball team. |
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담당강사 | Audrey | 등록일 | 2014-08-12 |
첨삭 내용 | Jun,
Standing in line to see the show tonight and there’s a light on, heavy glow. By the way, I tried to say I’ll be there waiting for, Danny the girl is singing songs to me between the mark key overload. By the way, I tried to say I’ll be there waiting for…
I know that you’re wondering what am I talking about, right? Well, I’m just singing you a song of the Red Hot Chili Peppers. It is entitled ‘By the way.’ Actually I’m listening to that song earlier and since I can’t really sing it live then I just typed it here. ^-^ Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! On the other hand, I know Hyun-Jin Ryu. I’ve read articles about him before and based on the things, I can tell that he is really good at baseball. Though, I am not familiar with Shin-Soo Choo. So, I’ll also searched him in the internet one of these days. By the way, do you know Lee Dae ho? I believe he is also a baseball player who plays for the Orix Buffaloes. He was really popular two to three years ago. Well anyways, I think I’m writing to many things again. I’m so sorry (T-T). I’m both talkative in class and here as well. T-T Hu! Hu! Hu! I’ll be waiting for your reply and take care!^^,
P.S. I’m so EXCITED to hear your stories about concerts later!^^,
Lots of love, Audrey.
========================================================================== Corrections: Audrey, are you check Korean MLB player Hyun-Jin Ryu ? >>Audrey, have you searched for Korean MLB player Hyun-Jin Ryu?
Also, there is another player in MLB. >> Actually, there is another player that I would like you to meet.
He's name is Shin-Soo Choo. >> He is Shin-Soo Choo.
And, This is my script. I wrote them but can't read in our class. I try to speak my story. but it is a little hard. >> And I’ll be sharing the script that I wrote before the class (I didn’t use it during the discussion because I really want to practice my skills but it is a little difficult for me).
When I was high school, I watched my first baseball game. >> I watched my first baseball game when I was in high school.
My high school has a baseball team. >> It was a high school baseball tournament and my school was a participant of that competition.
So, some of my classmates are baseball player. >> So, some of my classmates are baseball players.
In KOREA, there is the best famous high school baseball cup, the name of President cup. >> In Korea, the high school’s baseball tournament is called the President Cup.
In the high school baseball season, Our team won the game continuously and went to the final match. >> And I’m very proud to say that my school was the best during those time. Our team was consistent in every game and we even made it to the finals.
When the final match, all of the students went to the baseball park to cheer for our team. >> I remembered that all of my schoolmates were cheering for our team during the final game.
My friends and I was very excited and the match was very fun. >>In addition, my friends and I were very excited to watch the exciting final game.
My classmate hit the homerun and our team won the game and got a Cup. >> And as expected, one of the team players made the winning homerun and our school won the President Cup.
Also, He got a mvp. I felt that the cheering is fun. >> Also, that player was the MVP of that season. It’s the first time that I felt cheering is fun.
After my first time to watch baseball game, I go to the baseball park for my favorite baseball team. >>Since then, I’ve become a baseball fanatic.
*********Wow! The story sounds really exciting and moving. I wished that I was there to see it with my own eyes. Well, anyways thanks for sharing that experience with me!^^, |