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제목 last weekend my activity 등록일 2014-08-19
내용 Last weekend so busy.
I was hiking with my daughter and her friends Namsan mountain.
Namsan is located in middle of seoul, the mountain is not high.
We walked for an hour up the mauntain.
The view from the mountain so fantastic. At the top of the mountain we
had used the ice cream.
Although diffcult to clib the mountain daughter, was really fun.
We promise to climb Namsam mountain often.
담당강사 Mae 등록일 2014-08-19
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Last weekend was so busy. I was went hiking with my daughter and her friends in Namsan mountain. Namsan is located in the middle of seoul, the mountain is not high. We walked for an hour up to the mauntain mountain. The view from the mountain was so fantastic. At the top of the mountain we had used ice cream. Although it was diffcult to clib the mountain daughter for my daughter to climb the mountain, it was really fun. We promise to climb Namsam mountain often.

 

Hi Changhyeon,

Thank you so much for sharing a lot about your weekend. It's great to hear that you and your daugter had fun there. I hope i can also visit that place. Have a nice day!

Teacher Mae

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