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I love to watch a sports game but I have never seen a game on site.

-> I love to watch a sports game but I have never seen a live game on site.

However I have a unforgettable game I watched when I was eighteen years old.

-> However I had an unforgettable game experience I watched when I was eighteen years old.

At 2002 World Cup season, I watched my first soccer game in front of city hall with my friends on the big TV.

-> At In 2002 World Cup Season, I watched my first soccer game in front of the city hall with my friends on the big TV screen.

It was the game against Italy. - GOOD!

There were many people rooting for korea.

->There were many people rooting for Korea.  - GOOD!

My friends and I also pulled for korea.

-> My friends and I also pulled for Korea.

It was so exciting to cheer for our team loudly. - GOOD!

It was very fun to be a part of the crowd.  - GOOD!

Because Winner of the game was korea, My friends and I felt happy.

-> Because Winner of the game was korea, My friends and I felt happy because the Korean won the game.

It is a very exciting memory to remember now.

-> It was a very exciting memory to remember now.

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Hi Moon! Watching sport games are really fun especially if you are supporting your own team. I am glad to know that you were able to experience watching a game but it will be more fun if you'll be able to watch it live. Thank you for sharing this with me. Have a good night! ^_^

-T. Monica