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제목 | I wish to say "cabbage" yeasterday | 등록일 | 2014-08-21 |
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내용 | Hello! teacher Aileen I always appreciate for your lecture. And I am trying to talk about the vegetables in which I like yesterday. that is cabbage and onion I am crazy that vegetables tast. thanks!! |
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담당강사 | Aileen | 등록일 | 2014-08-22 |
첨삭 내용 | Hello! teacher Aileen I always appreciate for your lecture. And I am trying to talk about the vegetables in which I like yesterday. that is cabbage and onion I am crazy that vegetables tast. thanks!!
CORRECTIONS: I wish to say "cabbage" yeasterday. -> I wished to say ‘cabbage’ yesterday. Hello! teacher Aileen I always appreciate for your lecture. -> Hello Teacher Aileen! I always appreciate you in our lecture. And I am trying to talk about the vegetables in which I like yesterday. -> And I was trying to talk about my favorite vegetable yesterday. that is cabbage and onion I am crazy that vegetables tast. thanks!! -> Those are cabbage and onion, I am crazy with their taste. Thanks!!
COMMENT: Hi Shawn! I like cabbage also. It has unique taste. About our class, I also appreciate your effort and your kindness. Thank you! Have a nice day! ^^, |