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제목 I wish to say "cabbage" yeasterday 등록일 2014-08-21
내용 Hello!
teacher Aileen
I always appreciate for your lecture.
And I am trying to talk about the vegetables in which I like yesterday.
that is cabbage and onion
I am crazy that vegetables tast.
thanks!!
담당강사 Aileen 등록일 2014-08-22
첨삭 내용

Hello! teacher Aileen I always appreciate for your lecture. And I am trying to talk about the vegetables in which I like yesterday. that is cabbage and onion I am crazy that vegetables tast. thanks!!

 

CORRECTIONS:

I wish to say "cabbage" yeasterday.

-> I wished to say ‘cabbage’ yesterday.

Hello! teacher Aileen I always appreciate for your lecture.

-> Hello Teacher Aileen! I always appreciate you in our lecture.

 And I am trying to talk about the vegetables in which I like yesterday.

-> And I was trying to talk about my favorite vegetable yesterday.

that is cabbage and onion I am crazy that vegetables tast. thanks!!

-> Those are cabbage and onion, I am crazy with their taste. Thanks!!

 

COMMENT:

Hi Shawn! I like cabbage also. It has unique taste. 

About our class, I also appreciate your effort and your kindness.

Thank you! Have a nice day! ^^,

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