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제목 HOMEWORK 등록일 2014-08-21
내용 HOMEWORK: WRITE A PARAGRAPH ON THE TOPIC OF THE WEATHER, BASED ON THE LESSON WE DID TODAY, AND SEND TO ME.

It was cloudy and a little bit chilly, but it is sunny now. So I can play the soccer outside.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-08-21
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HOMEWORK: WRITE A PARAGRAPH ON THE TOPIC OF THE WEATHER, BASED ON THE LESSON WE DID TODAY, AND SEND TO ME.

Hi Kim - Here is the correction to your statements.  Though a paragraph would consist of at least 5-6 sentences, I'll accept the fact that there is not too much a person can say about the weather...blush

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It was cloudy and a little bit chilly earlier in the day, but I can play soccer outside because it is sunny now.

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It was cloudy and a little bit chilly earlier today, but now it is sunny.  It's pleasant enough to play soccer outside.

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It was cloudy and a little bit chilly, but it is sunny now. So I can play the soccer outside . (Leave out the article, "the").

 

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