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제목 | I write about Cook | 등록일 | 2014-08-27 |
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내용 | Now, because we have the smart phone, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through app called kakao-talk. I make a chat room on kakaotalk since everyone uses kakaotalk in korea these days. I tell my friends the time and date. And then I chat with my friends about dinner menu. and decide dinner menu. I usually cook 떡볶이 and korea noodle for guest since those are my favorite things to eat and to do easily. My friends are satisfied with my 떡볶이 and 라면 because I use a lot of chilli and my friends all like chilli. Everyone usually has a good time at my house and we eat lots of food together. I always thank you |
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담당강사 | Monica | 등록일 | 2014-08-27 |
첨삭 내용 | [C O R R E C T I O N] Now, because we have the smart phone, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through app called kakao-talk. -> I make a chat room on kakaotalk since everyone uses kakaotalk in korea these days. -> I make a chat room on kakaotalk since everyone uses I tell my friends the time and date. -> I tell my friends the time and the date of our dinner. And then I chat with my friends about dinner menu. and decide dinner menu. -> And then, I chat with my friends about the dinner menu and decide I usually cook 떡볶이 and korea noodle for guest since those are my favorite things to eat and to do easily. -> I usually cook 떡볶이 (Toppokki) and a Korean noodle for my guests since those are my favorite My friends are satisfied with my 떡볶이 and 라면 because I use a lot of chilli and my friends all like chilli. -> My friends are satisfied with my 떡볶이 (Toppokki) and 라면 (ramyeon) because I use a lot of chi Everyone usually has a good time at my house and we eat lots of food together. -GREAT I always thank you. -GREAT [C O M M E N T] Hi Moon! A meal becomes more delicious especially when you share it with others. :) I really enjoyed reading this text from you. Our generation is lucky to have a technology that may help us to communicate with other people. It is good to know that you are having a great time with your friends when you eat together. I guess you can use the internet to look for other meals you may prepare for them. I hope I could taste your dishes as well. :) Thanks for sharing this! P.S. You are always welcome! ^_^ |