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제목 I write about Cook 등록일 2014-08-27
내용 Now, because we have the smart phone, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through app called kakao-talk. I make a chat room on kakaotalk since everyone uses kakaotalk in korea these days. I tell my friends the time and date. And then I chat with my friends about dinner menu. and decide dinner menu. I usually cook 떡볶이 and korea noodle for guest since those are my favorite things to eat and to do easily. My friends are satisfied with my 떡볶이 and 라면 because I use a lot of chilli and my friends all like chilli. Everyone usually has a good time at my house and we eat lots of food together.


I always thank you
담당강사 Monica 등록일 2014-08-27
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Now, because we have the smart phone, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through app called kakao-talk.

-> Now, because we have the  Using smart phone, I usually invite my friends to  eat dinner at my house through an application called Kakao-talk.

I make a chat room on kakaotalk since everyone uses kakaotalk in korea these days.

-> I make a chat room on kakaotalk since everyone uses kakaotalk   it in korea these days. -GREAT!

I tell my friends the time and date.

-> I tell my friends the time and the date of our dinner.

And then I chat with my friends about dinner menu. and decide dinner menu.

-> And then,  I chat with my friends about the dinner menu and decide dinner menu for it.

I usually cook 떡볶이 and korea noodle for guest since those are my favorite things to eat and to do easily.

-> I usually cook 떡볶이 (Toppokki) and  a Korean noodle for my guests since those are my favorite things food to eat and to cook do easily.

My friends are satisfied with my 떡볶이   and 라면 because I use a lot of chilli and my friends all like chilli.

-> My friends are satisfied with my 떡볶이 (Toppokki) and 라면 (ramyeon)  because I use a lot of chillis and all my friends all like chilli it!

Everyone usually has a good time at my house and we eat lots of food together. -GREAT

I always thank you. -GREAT

[C O M M E N T]

Hi Moon!

A meal becomes more delicious especially when you share it with others. :)

I really enjoyed reading this text from you. Our generation is lucky to have a technology that may help us to communicate with other people. It is good to know that you are having a great time with your friends when you eat together. I guess you can use the internet to look for other meals you may prepare for them. I hope I could taste your dishes as well. :) Thanks for sharing this!

P.S.

You are always welcome! ^_^

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