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| 제목 | Hi! Teacher | 등록일 | 2014-02-10 |
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| 내용 | Hi~ my teacher, Mitch! My phone turned off this morning, So I missed your call. Tommorrow, I check my handphone battery again! Have a nice day and see you. |
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| 담당강사 | Mitch | 등록일 | 2014-02-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Incorrect: Hi~ my teacher, Mitch! Correct: Hi, my Teacher Mitch! Incorrect: My phone turned off this morning, Correct: My phone was turned off this morning. So I missed your call. Incorrect: Tommorrow, I check my handphone battery again! Correct: Tomorrow, I will check my handy phone battery again! Have a nice day and see you. =============================================================== Hello there, Stephanie! Thank you for writing a message for me. I understand that your phone run out of battery that's why I couldn't contact you. I'll catch you again tomorrow. By the way, if you want to send me a message. Please write it in the "MESSAGE" section, not here in the "COMPOSITION" section. Have a great day, Teacher Mitch^_^ | ||