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제목 homework (UNIT2) 등록일 2014-08-28
내용 Where do you live?
-> I live in Chonan. It is my hometowm. But I don't have lived this city for my whole life. When I was 20 years old, I lived in Seoul, capital of South Korea, because of my university. At that time, it is my first experience that I live alone. After I graduate my school, I came back to my hometown because my company send me to the city.

How long have you been living there?
-> I have lived for 3 years in Chonan after I came back to my hometown. It is the completely same as the period that I have worked at my company. And I am living with my parents. They live this city for about 30 years.

Please explain me a little bit about your house/apartment.
-> I am living in apartment that my parents own. It has 4 rooms and 2 restrooms. Before my sister moved to other city, my family was 4, father, mother, sister and me. So a person could use a room. In the living room, there is a big television, so my family take a rest most time there.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-08-28
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Where do you live? -> I live in Chonan. It is my hometowm. But I don't have lived this city for my whole life. When I was 20 years old, I lived in Seoul, capital of South Korea, because of my university. At that time, it is my first experience that I live alone. After I graduate my school, I came back to my hometown because my company send me to the city. How long have you been living there? -> I have lived for 3 years in Chonan after I came back to my hometown. It is the completely same as the period that I have worked at my company. And I am living with my parents. They live this city for about 30 years. Please explain me a little bit about your house/apartment. -> I am living in apartment that my parents own. It has 4 rooms and 2 restrooms. Before my sister moved to other city, my family was 4, father, mother, sister and me. So a person could use a room. In the living room, there is a big television, so my family take a rest most time there.

Jun -- this was supposed to have been written as a paragraph, similar to the 'sample answer' in the unit.  Next time, remove the question, and write an ongoing paragraph.  This will demonstrate your skills in presenting your ideas grammatically on paper.  Great attempt! -- Teacher Wilson

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I live in Chonan, it is my hometown and the place I was born.   At age 20, I moved away to live in Seoul, the capital of Korea, where I attended University.  It was my first experience living alone, and apart from my family.  After I graduated, my company relocated to work in Chonan where I have been living with my parents for three years.  We live in an apratment which they have owned for 30 years.   It has 4 rooms and 2 restrooms, so each of us occupy a room each.  My sister occupied the fourth room, until she moved away to another city.  We have a large television in the living room where we relax most of the time.

 

 

 

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