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제목 | Describe my house (1/2) | 등록일 | 2014-08-29 |
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내용 | I will tell you about my house. I live in an apartment in Seocho-gu which is southern part of Seoul. It is on the 7th floor and has a beautiful view of a park. There are three bedrooms, a bath room, a kitchen and a living room in my apartment. When you open the door, you can see a shoe cabinet on your left. On your right, there is a bath room. Every morning I take a shower listening to music. Beyond the entrance place, there is a living room in the middle of my house. The living room has a comfortable sofa, luxurious smart TV and home theater system. I like to spend time watching TV in the living room. These days, I watch TV historical drama about Korean traditional hero. |
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담당강사 | Love | 등록일 | 2014-08-29 |
첨삭 내용 | I will tell you about my house. I live in an apartment in Seocho-gu which is southern part of Seoul. It is on the 7th floor and has a beautiful view of a park. There are three bedrooms, a bath room, a kitchen and a living room in my apartment. When you open the door, you can see a shoe cabinet on your left. On your right, there is a bath room. Every morning I take a shower listening to music. Beyond the entrance place, there is a living room in the middle of my house. The living room has a comfortable sofa, luxurious smart TV and home theater system. I like to spend time watching TV in the living room. These days, I watch TV historical drama about Korean traditional hero. ===================================================== -> I will tell you about my house. I live in an apartment in Seocho-gu, which is in the southern part of Seoul. -> There are three bedrooms, a bathroom, a kitchen and a living room in my apartment. - > On your right, there is a bathroom. -> Every morning I take a shower while listening to music. -> These days, I watch =================================================== Keep being a diligent student Jason! Have a nice day and a happy weekend! |