Looking back to my childhood memories, I was just an ordinary student who didn't get noticed very much. It seems that I didn't have much memorable occasions when I was in a teenager, ages because I was not so such brave to become a notorious school rebel who enjoyed breaking the school rules. Rather, I was a shy and timid, and preferred not to be that obvious to others. student who focused on me, not being in front of others. Nevertheless, I do recall something memorable that happened to me when I was in teen ages was that at I sometimes I skipped the private institutes where I spent most of my time after school, I would sneak out went to a movie theater to watch a Chinese action movie, which was quite popular among teenagers in those days. I was happend to be also a big fan of Chinese action stars such as Jackie Chan.

**Your ideas were clear and strong.  During next class session I'd like us to discuss what you noticed in the above review and edit.