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제목 | Watching a movie with my friend | 등록일 | 2014-09-02 |
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내용 | The last time I watched a movie in the cinema was about one year ago. I watched ‘Resident Evil 4’ with my friend. It was very difficult to find someone who wanted to accompany me to a horror movie, so I promised my friend that I would treat him to dinner if he’d go with me. Since it was a very popular movie, I reserved the tickets through the Internet a few days earlier and on the day, I picked them up at the ticket counter. I bought popcorn and beverages to eat during the screening. As it turned out, the movie was not as good as I expected it to be. After watching the movie, I took him to a restaurant as I had promised and bought him dinner. After I came home, I wrote a review of the movie on my blog. |
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담당강사 | Jae | 등록일 | 2014-09-02 |
첨삭 내용 | 1. The last time I watched a movie in cinema was about one year ago. (good sentence) 2. I watched ‘Resident Evil 4’ with my friend. (good sentence) 3. It was very difficult to find someone who wanted to accompany me to a horror movie, so I promised my friend that I would treat him to dinner if he’d go with me. Correction: It was very difficult to find someone who can accompany me to watch a horror movie so I promised my friend that I would treat him for dinner if he'd go with me. 4. Since it was a very popular movie, I reserved the tickets through the Internet a few days earlier. (good sentence) 5. And on the day, I picked them up at the ticket counter. Correction: And on that day, I (got) picked up my tickets at the ticket counter. 6. I bought popcorn and beverages to eat during the screening. Correction: I bought popcorn and beverages so that we'll have something to eat during the screening. 7. As it turned out, the movie was not as good as I expected it to be. (good sentence) 8. After watching the movie, I took him to a restaurant as I had promised and bought him dinner. (good sentence) 9. After I came home, I wrote a review of the movie on my blog. (good sentence) Message: Hi Jason, Thank you so much for leaving a message here. I truly appreciate it. Thanks for sharing your experiences. I know that movie but I haven't watched it yet. But I'll try to watch that movie. Well, I also like watching horror movies. :) Just recently, I watched a movie: "Rurouni Kenshin". It is a Japanese movie. It is a live action movie adapted from the anime series and manga "Rurouni Kenshin" / Samurai X. I really like this anime. I watched the series and I read the manga too. The live action movie is great. Somehow, they were able to present the highlights/ important scenes. You should watch it too. ^_^ Take care, |