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제목 | lunch break | 등록일 | 2014-09-02 |
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내용 | I usually have an hour for lunch break. It usually start at 11:30 and ends at 12:30. I usually eat with my coworkers in my department. I usually go down to company cafeteria. There are many kinds of food in cafeteria such as korean, chinese, japanese, intalian, and so on. Among them, the most popular food in cafeteria is korean food. They serve many kinds of menus such as 바베큐, kimchi stew, kimchi fried rice, and stir fri noodles with vegetable. After enjoying lunch, We usually go walking outside of company, and We usually talk about our work lives and any new gossip that is going around in the company. Sometimes, we talk about our girlfriends or our family, some single guys would tell us about their blind dates. Because we are just coworkers. |
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담당강사 | Mae | 등록일 | 2014-09-02 |
첨삭 내용 | I usually have an hour for lunch break. ->Good sentence It usually start at 11:30 and ends at 12:30. ->It usually starts at 11:30 am and ends at 12:30pm I usually eat with my coworkers in my department. I usually go down to company cafeteria. ->I usually go to our company cafeteria There are many kinds of food in cafeteria such as korean, chinese, japanese, intalian, and so on. -> There are many kinds of food in the cafeteria such as korean, chinese, japanese, intalian, and so on. Among them, the most popular food in cafeteria is korean food. ->Among them, the most popular food in the cafeteria is korean food They serve many kinds of menus such as 바베큐, kimchi stew, kimchi fried rice, and stir fri noodles with vegetable. ->Good sentence After enjoying lunch, We usually go walking outside of company, and We usually talk about our work lives and any new gossip that is going around in the company. ->After enjoying lunch, we usually go walking outside the company and we talk about our work lives and any new gossip that is going on around the company. Sometimes, we talk about our girlfriends or our family, some single guys would tell us about their blind dates.Because we are just coworkers ->Sometimes, we talk about our girlfriends or our family. Some single guys would tell us about their blind dates, because we are coworkers.
Hi! Thank you for explaining this again. Me too, I have 1 hour break time. It starts at 9:30 am until 10:30 am. Have a nice day!
Teacher Mae |