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제목 Sorry, I can't talk with you because of my business trip today 등록일 2014-09-02
내용 I must go suddenly to the business trip today. so I cannot answer the phone. Wish to understand although I cannot get please.

thank you
담당강사 Jae 등록일 2014-09-02
첨삭 내용

I must go suddenly to the business trip today so I cannot answer the phone. 

Correction: I suddenly need to go on a business trip so I will not be able to answer your call.

Wish to understand although I cannot get please. 

Correction: I can't attend our class today. I hope you'll understand. 

Thank you. [good sentence] 

Message:

Hi Shawn,

Thank you so much for leaving a message here and for informing me that you will go on a business trip. I truly appreciate it.

I understand. :) I am always looking forward to more chances to talk with you.

Have a wonderful day! See you next class! ^_^

Take care, 
Teacher Jae ♥

 

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