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제목 | About my family | 등록일 | 2014-09-02 |
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내용 | My family is consisted of 4 people, father, mother, sister, and me. Now my sister is living in another city, so only 3 people is living together. Many family in Korea was big such as living with their grand parents until 1980, but after that, they start to live with only 2 generations. Therefore we don't have experiences that we heard some old age stories from our grand parent. And people live alone increase thesedays. They want to live without their neighborhood, and freely. Even they don't want to meet their relatives. In my case, I like to meet my hometown friend. They are pure when we meet comparing to company colleague. That's why I feel comfortable whenever I visit my hometown. | ||
담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-09-10 |
첨삭 내용 | My family ***Jun --- try and develop the sentence below a little more. I'm not clear what you are really trying to convey to me. (Use your thesaurus). ***They want to live without their neighborhood, and freely. Even they don't want to meet their relatives. In my case, I like to meet my hometown friend. They are pure when we meet comparing to company colleague. That's why I feel comfortable whenever I visit my hometown.
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