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제목 Watching Movie. 등록일 2014-09-03
내용 You indicate in your survey you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? who do you go with?

-Right I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey/ I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching movie once a week. I go to move theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home throught TV or computer. I moved in to my new house last December. One of it's advantage is close from my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old house. I almost go to the theater with my sister Because I lives with her, whenever I can go there.
담당강사 Meril 등록일 2014-09-03
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You indicate in your survey you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? who do you go with? 

-> You indicated in your survey that you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? Who do you go with? 

Right I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey/

-> Right, I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey.

I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching movie once a week.

-> I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching a movie once a week.

I go to move theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home throught TV or computer.

-> I go to the movie theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home through TV or computer instead

I moved in to my new house last December.

-> I moved into my new house last December. 

One of it's advantage is close from my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old house.

-> One of it's advantages is it is close from to my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old staying at house. 

I almost go to the theater with my sister Because I lives with her, whenever I can go there.

-> Whenever I can go there to the movie theater, I almostly go with my sister, because I lives with her.

 

Hi Song, thank you for sharing thsi with me. I envy you, because you are always with your sister. I miss my older sister, she lives in Canada that is why I can't be with her. I call her sometimes but that is not enough for me. I can see that you have a really good relationship with your sister and also with your brother. I am so very happy for you!

-Meril ^_^

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