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제목 | Watching Movie. | 등록일 | 2014-09-03 |
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내용 | You indicate in your survey you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? who do you go with? -Right I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey/ I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching movie once a week. I go to move theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home throught TV or computer. I moved in to my new house last December. One of it's advantage is close from my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old house. I almost go to the theater with my sister Because I lives with her, whenever I can go there. |
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담당강사 | Meril | 등록일 | 2014-09-03 |
첨삭 내용 | You indicate in your survey you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? who do you go with? -> You indicated in your survey that you like to watch a movie. How often do you go to the movies? Where do you usally go? Who do you go with? Right I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey/ -> Right, I checked watching a movie in my interasting survey. I like watching a movie. I'm usually watching movie once a week. -> I like watching a movie. I I go to move theater every weekend. If I don't have enought time and money to go there, I'm used to watching a movie at home throught TV or computer. -> I go to the movie theater every weekend. If I don't have enough I moved in to my new house last December. -> I moved into my new house last December. One of it's advantage is close from my house. The reason why I can often go to the movie theater more than old house. -> One of it's advantages is it is close I almost go to the theater with my sister Because I lives with her, whenever I can go there. -> Whenever I can go
Hi Song, thank you for sharing thsi with me. I envy you, because you are always with your sister. I miss my older sister, she lives in Canada that is why I can't be with her. I call her sometimes but that is not enough for me. I can see that you have a really good relationship with your sister and also with your brother. I am so very happy for you! -Meril ^_^ |