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| 제목 | Unit 11. Question 3 : Describe a picture | 등록일 | 2014-09-05 |
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| 내용 | This picture has been taken inside. There are 3 people in front of a table. 2 people are one side and the other is opposite side. On the left side, a man who is wearing black glasses and a bracelet on his left hand is sitting and resting his chin on his hand. on the left side of the man, a woman who is wearing a white top, a hat and wearing a necklace on her neck is sitting a chair. On the right, a man is wearing ivory dress suit. And, a laptop is opened on the desk. In the back ground, there are handrail between post. It seems like that they are talking discussion concerning their issues. |
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| 담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-09-10 |
| 첨삭 내용 | This picture has been taken inside. There are 3 people in front of a table. 2 people are one side and the other is opposite side. On the left side, a man who is wearing black glasses and a bracelet on his left hand is sitting and resting his chin on his hand. On the left side of the man, a woman who is wearing a white top, a hat and wearing a necklace on her neck is sitting a chair. On the right, a man is wearing an ivory dress suit, and, a laptop is opened on the desk. In the background, there's a Commendable description Sam! Take note of the minor, but important modifications noted in red.
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