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제목 | Hi Monica. Did you have a good weekend? | 등록일 | 2014-09-11 |
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내용 | Hi Monica.. Thank you for worring me at last friday. So, I got a good result. The bad boy had been punished by his teacher and his parents. Also I met his parents and teacher, and told them about him. We dicussed many things. We let him know his faults. We got his apology. He promise me that he never do wrong. ^^ Also I had a good holiday which is called Chusuk in korean. I think that Chusok is same thanksgiving day. All of Korean go around relations and say hello each other and memory ancestors At Chusok. How do you do at your holiday? |
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담당강사 | Monica | 등록일 | 2014-09-11 |
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Hi Monica.. -> Hi Monica. - Hello Yongsu! ^^ Thank you for worring me at last friday. -> Thank you for worrying about me at last friday. So, I got a good result. -> So, I got a good result. -great! The bad boy had been punished by his teacher and his parents. -> The bad boy Also I met his parents and teacher, and told them about him. -> We dicussed many things. ->We discussed many things. -great! We let him know his faults. -> We let him know his We got his apology. -> We He promise me that he never do wrong. ^^ -> He promised me that he will never do Also I had a good holiday which is called Chusuk in korean. -> I think that Chusok is same thanksgiving day. -> I think All of Korean go around relations and say hello each other and memory ancestors At Chusok. -> How do you do at your holiday? ->
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Hi Yongsu! I am so happy for you! It was nice to know you've good results. I just hope that he will be a better person from now on. Anyway, I forgot to greet you. Happy Chuseok! ^_^ I have heard Chuseok is one of the major holidays there in Korea. And yes, you are right. It is the same as the Thanksgiving Day in USA. I want to feel Chuseok Holiday there in Korea! ^^ By the way, I had a long weekend vacation. i did not go to work last Monday and Tuesday. Last weekened, I went to an amusement park with my friend. I had fun! I took a rest over the long weekend! ^^ Thanks for sharing and have a great night! |