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제목 jogging 등록일 2014-09-12
내용 I go to the gym in my company complex.
I try to go to the gym at least twice a week.
I spend about 1 hour at the gym.

There are nor many different type of equipment that i use.
One of my favorite is the running machine.
I always use this machine for thirty minutes.

I like to go to the gym because it help me to release my stress.

It also help me start my dag early.
담당강사 Faith 등록일 2014-09-15
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I go to the gym in my company complex. I try to go to the gym at least twice a week. I spend about 1 hour at the gym. There are nor many different types of equipments that I use. One of my favorite is the running machine. I always use this machine for thirty minutes. I like to go to the gym because it helps me to release my stress. It also help me start my dag day early.

 

Hi Sera! 

Few grammar lapses, keep it up!

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