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제목 I write.. 등록일 2014-09-12
내용 Q)What is your career philosophy? / What is your career principle?
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My career philoshophy is to enjoy what I am doing, love my workplace and never make an enemy. I believe that when I enjoy my job, love my workplace and mingle well with and members, I can build a strong teamwork in my team and bring a tangible result to my company.
담당강사 Monica 등록일 2014-09-13
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Q)What is your career philosophy? / What is your career principle?

A) My career philoshophy is to enjoy what I am doing, love my workplace and never make an enemy. -ok

I believe that when I enjoy my job, love my workplace and mingle well with and members, I can build a strong teamwork in my team and bring a tangible result to my company.

 -> I believe that when I enjoy my job, love my workplace and mingle well with and members, I can build a strong teamwork in with my teammates and bring a tangible good result to my company.

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