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제목 | Present the schedule for the first day | 등록일 | 2014-02-14 |
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내용 | May I have your attention please. I'll explain the schedule for the first day of the workshop. Today's schedule is started at 10 O'clock with team activity. This will be over at 6 O'clock. First, for team activity, all of you are requested to divide into 3 teams including members from different departments. After then elect a leader and make a team name. The lunch break time is from 1 to 2. After team activity you'll have barbeque party at the Rose garden from 6 p.m to 8 p.m. Presedent Kim is supposed to take part in the party to encourage you. Also some special presents will be parpared for you during the party. I promise that you can look forward to that presents. I hope everyone can participate in today's events. Thank you for your attention. |
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담당강사 | Tiny | 등록일 | 2014-02-14 |
첨삭 내용 | May I have your attention please. I'll explain the schedule for the first day of the workshop. Today's activity will start at 10 O'clock with team. This will finish at 6 O'clock. First, for team activity, all of you are requested to divide into 3 teams including members from different departments. After then elect a leader and make a team name. The lunch break time is from 1 to 2. After team activity you'll have barbeque party at the Rose garden from 6 pm to 8 pm President Kim is supposed to take part in the party to encourage you. Also some special presents will be parpared for you during the party. I promise that you can look forward to that presents. I hope everyone can participate in today's events. Thank you for your attention. |