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제목 The word I didn't tell you while last calling 등록일 2014-09-16
내용 Hi Leah

I expain something I didn't told you while calling yesterday

Last sunday, I visited my older sister's home

My older sister gave me play equipment, It's called TRIDER in korea

It's smiliar to kickboard
there are two differences between both of them

trident has three wheels and two foothold
but kickboard has two wheels and just on foothold

my childer was greatly pleased to get a trider

if you don't understand , click below website
http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/41wHt%2BXjN6L._SX425_.jpg

I wonder what do you call it?

Thank you
담당강사 Leah2 등록일 2014-09-16
첨삭 내용

Hi Leah I want to  explain  something about what I  told yesterday's class. Last sunday, I visited my older sister's home My older sister gave me play equipment, It's called TRIDER in korea It's smiliar to kickboard,There are  differences between trider and kickboard, trider has three wheels and two foothold but kickboard has two wheels and just on foothold my childen was greatly pleased to get a trider if you don't understand , click below website http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/41wHt%2BXjN6L._SX425_.jpg I wonder what do you call it? Thank you.

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