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제목 | Staying at home during vacations. | 등록일 | 2014-09-17 |
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내용 | I like staying at home during vacations because it saves money and it's vary cozy. I'm vary busy because of my job. So I want to relax at home during my vacation. Another benepit of staying home is that I don't have money and schedule. I spend my times sleeping in and watching movies and musics. I could do whatever I want to. So I love tne freedom. Sometimes, I like to meet my friends. Frendship help refresh mind and reduce my stress. Therefore, I realley like staying at home during my vacations. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-09-19 |
첨삭 내용 | I like staying at home during vacations because it saves money and it's
***Great idea flow ... Teacher Wynston |