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제목 Wenting out with work colleagues (1/2) 등록일 2014-09-18
내용 My company is located in the downtown area,
so it's surrounded by many different kinds of nice restaurants.
If there is a lot of work, I often eat lunch at my company cafeteria.
Otherwise, I go out for lunch with my coworkers.

The last time I went to lunch was about 3 days ago at a farewell meal for my senior.
He and I had lunch together. We went to a small Indian restaurant called Mogul near our office.
The restaurant is almost 20 years old, but I really like the comfortable atmosphere.
The people there are all very friendly and the interior is very unique.
There were only about 10 tables! But we can have very high-quality healthy food.
담당강사 Jae 등록일 2014-09-18
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Wenting out with work colleagues (1/2) 

Correction: Going out with my colleagues (1/2)

My company is located in the downtown area, so it's surrounded by many different kinds of nice restaurants. (good sentence)

If there is a lot of work, I often eat lunch at my company cafeteria. (good sentence)

Otherwise, I go out for lunch with my coworkers.  (good sentence)

The last time I went to lunch was about 3 days ago at a farewell meal for my senior.

Correction: The last time I went out for lunch was about 3 days ago at a farewell party for my senior. 

He and I had lunch together. (good sentence)

We went to a small Indian restaurant called Mogul near our office.  (good sentence)

The restaurant is almost 20 years old, but I really like the comfortable atmosphere.  (good sentence)

The people there are all very friendly and the interior is very unique.  (good sentence)

There were only about 10 tables!  (good sentence)

But we can have very high-quality healthy food.  (good sentence)

MESSAGE:

Hi Jason, 

Thank you so much for leaving a message here. I truly appreciate it.

I'm glad that you shared your wonderful stories and experiences. I hope I can go to that restaurant too. :)

I would like to try their foods.

Have a beautiful day ahead! See you next class! ^_^

Take care, 
Teacher Jae ♥

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