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제목 Playing Sports 등록일 2014-09-22
내용 I really like watching the baseball game, but I don't have any memory about playing the game.
Instead of the baseball, I have lots of memories in playing bastketball when I was high school student.There were 4 basketball rims on the play ground but there were many students who want to play. Everyday, I ate my lunch box in the 3rd rest time, and I dashed out to the playground only after finshing the 4th class. If I preoccupied one of the rim, I play the basketball for fully 1 hour. I was the tallest guy in my high school so always my position was Center.
I enjoyed the basketball not only in the middle of summer, but also in the winter.
There was no gym in my school, so I played it on the slippery ground by snow & ice.
Looking back on it now, that was quite a pleasant experience.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-09-24
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I really like watching the baseball game, but I don't have any memory about playing the game IT. Instead of the baseball, I have lots of memories in playing bastketball when I was A high school student.There were 4 basketball rims on the play ground but there were many students who wantED to play.  Everyday, I ate my lunch box in DURING the 3rd rest time, QUARTER, and I dashed out to the playground only after finshing the 4th class. If I preoccupied one of the rimS, I WOULD play the basketball for AN ENTIRE fully 1 hour. I was the tallest guy in my high school so always my position was ALWAYS Center. I enjoyed the basketball not only in the middle of summer, but also in the winter. There was no gym in my school, so I played it on the slippery ground by ON snow & ice. Looking back on it now, that was quite a pleasant experience.

 

GREAT JOB ... :>)  

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