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제목 | 17~20 | 등록일 | 2014-09-30 |
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내용 | #17 Let me check my communicator again. Let's divide into 2 groups. 1 People that I've known them in advance to joining company and after. 2 SDS , and the other companies. 3 CMS team members, and the others. Oh more another team members? #18 But for 140 SDS people, the most are CMS people. Cause there are not many chances to meet other team members. #19 So, keyword is needed to connect all the employees of SDS. just like a hashtag of Facebook, twitter and instagram. #20 Let's put some keyword to find employee. like this! In my case i need a help with silverlight and i can give a help with optic and presentation. Me, ms.presentation can find out Mr. Silverlight, and Connected!! |
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담당강사 | Ritchell | 등록일 | 2014-10-01 |
첨삭 내용 | [CORRECTIONS] #17 Let me check my communicator again. Let's divide into 2 groups. -> #17 Let me check my communicator again. Let's divide into 2 groups. (no lapses) People that I've known them in advance -> People that I've known for a long time, 2 SDS and the other companies, 3 CMS team members and the others. Oh more another team members? #18 But for 140 SDS people, the most are CMS people. -> Oh more another team members? #18 But for 140 SDS people, the most are CMS members. Cause there are not many chances to meet other team members. -> Cause there are no many chances to meet other team members. #19 So, keyword is needed to connect all the employees of SDS. just like a hashtag of Facebook, twitter and instagram. -> #19 So, keyword is needed to connect all the employees of SDS. just like a hashtag on Facebook, twitter and instagram. #20 Let's put some keyword to find employee. like this! In my case i need -> #20 Let's put some keywords to find employee. Like this, in my case I need help with silverlight and I can give a hand with optic and presentation. Me, ms.presentation can find out Mr. Silverlight, and Conncted!! -> Me, ms.presentation can find out Mr. Silverlight and we can be connected! |