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| 제목 | 25~28 | 등록일 | 2014-09-30 |
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| 내용 | #25 We can do all these great things, with just adding KEYWORD. #26(Video playing) To be a tree, it news water, sun lights, wind, rain, nutritions and many more things. Human is same also. I can be s sun, water, sometime a wind, rain for someone I meet and vice versa. People should be connected. #27 Through KEYWORD. #28 If you have any questions please feel free to ask me. |
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| 담당강사 | Ritchell | 등록일 | 2014-10-01 |
| 첨삭 내용 | [CORRECTIONS] #25 We can do all these great things, with just adding KEYWORD. -> #25 We can do all these great things, with just adding the KEYWORD. #26(Video playing) To be a tree, it news water, sun lights, wind, rain, nutritions and many more things. -> #26(Video playing) To be a tree, it needs water, sun lights, wind, rain, nutritions and many more things. Human is same also. I can be s sun, water, sometime a wind, rain for someone I meet and vice versa. -> It works the same way for us. I can be the sun, water, wind, rain for someone I meet and vice versa. People should be connected. #27 Through KEYWORD. #28 If you have any questions please feel free to ask me. -> People should be connected through this KEYWORD. #28 If you have any questions please feel free to ask me. |
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