Intro. Hello, My name is Tomas.
Intro. Hello, My name is Tomas.

Main1. I live in Bundang near ori-station with wife. I married three months ago.
Main1. I live in Bundang near ori-station with wife. We got married three months ago.

Main2. My favorite sport is soccer. I like playing and watching soccer. So I play a soccer game with my coworkers every Monday.
Main2. My favorite sport is soccer. I like playing and watching soccer. So I play a soccer game with my coworkers every Monday. 

Main3. I work for Samsung SDS as a software engineer. Recently I develop application related mobile payment.
Main3. I work for Samsung SDS as a Software Engineer. Recently, I develop an application related to mobile payment.

Main4. Every weekend, I usually go to Han river park with my wife. We sometimes read a book or take a rest on the bench.
Main4. Every weekend, I usually go to Han River Park with my wife. We sometimes read a book or take a rest on a bench.

Main5. I graduated Soongsil university majored in electronic engineering Conclu. I really nice to meet you.
Main5. I graduated in Soongsil University majored in Electronic Engineering Conclu. It is really nice to meet you.

NOTE:
Red - capitalization
Blue - (be) verbs
Green - pronoun usage
Yellow - article usage
Pink - preposition slips

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Hi Mr. Tomas, 

It was nice meeting you too! Thank you for sending a composition. It only shows that you are interested and willing to learn English. Your sentences were quite good. You just have to observe proper capitalization when writing. Be mindful in choosing pronouns and articles that you are going to use next time. Also, do not forget about your be verbs and prepositions. It would be better if you will continue practicing your skills. Study well. Have a great day! 

Love,
Teacher Angel