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제목 About personality 등록일 2014-10-01
내용 I'm totally optimist. I feel happy easily. When I start to do something new, I always think I can do it. And other people say I'm confident. Everyone can achieve their dreams if they try. Everyone can earn much money if they studied the ways. But, sometimes I was frustrated when I fail some work. I'm too optimistic, therefore it takes very long time to overcome my defeat. When I was put the situation and I was exausted, many friends that have pessimistic minds treat me with their console. Therefore, I think there is not relationship between friendship and personality. We can become friends one another.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-05
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I'm totally optimist. I feel happy easily. When I start to do something new, I always think I can do it. And other people say I'm confident. Everyone can achieve their dreams if they try. Everyone can earn much money if they studied the ways. But, sometimes I was frustrated when I fail some work. I'm too optimistic, therefore it takes very long time to overcome my defeat. When I was put the situation and I was exausted, many friends that have pessimistic minds treat me with their console. Therefore, I think there is not relationship between friendship and personality. We can become friends one another.

 

Jun -- It will be a good exercise if we discuss this at our next session ...

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