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| 제목 | I wrote my answer, beacause I thought my answer was so weak. | 등록일 | 2014-10-02 |
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| 내용 | Firstly, Reading a newspaper gives me a lot of information about many things and people all over the world. In the past, I should buy a newspaper to read it, thesedays, I can read it anywhere, anytime because of a cell phone. That's realllllly nice. Secondly, it seems like reading a newspaper develop english skills. I can learn new words, and expressions as well. Lastly, when I talk with colleagues, I can lead a conversation as I give them various interesting information. |
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| 담당강사 | Nancy1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-02 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Firstly, Reading a newspaper gives me a lot of information about many things and people all over the world. In the past, I would buy a newspaper to read it. These days, I can read it anywhere or anytime because of a cell phone. That's really nice. Secondly, it seems like reading a newspaper can develop your English skills. I can learn new words, and expressions as well. Lastly, when I talk with colleagues, I can lead a conversation as I give them various interesting information.
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