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제목 Home improvement project 등록일 2014-10-02
내용 I live in an apartment, which is located in the eastern part of Suwon.
Two years ago, my family moved into an apartment.
When I first moved into my house, the wall color was all white and dirty.
So, my family decided to change the wallpaper and decorating in the living room.

We replaced the old wallpaper.
The new wallpaper has a bright, modern design and it has a grey color.
It made the room brighter.
We also decided to get new furniture.
We got a new coffee table, a TV and sofa.

I like these new change in my house.
Overall, I am satisfied with the changes to my house.
담당강사 Simon 등록일 2014-10-02
첨삭 내용

I live in an apartment, which is located in the eastern part of Suwon. Two years ago, my family moved into an apartment. When I first moved into my house, the wall color was all white and dirty. So, my family decided to change the wallpaper and decorating in the living room. We replaced the old wallpaper. The new wallpaper has a bright, modern design and it has a grey color. It made the room brighter. We also decided to get new furniture. We got a new coffee table, a TV and sofa. I like these new change in my house. Overall, I am satisfied with the changes to my house.

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Corrections

 I like these new change in my house.

—► I like these new changes in my house.

I also live in an apartment. I live with my younger brother and father. It has two rooms. I share my besdroom with my younger brother. We have been living here since I was elementary student. I love our neighborhood because it's peaceful and very accesible to different important places.

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