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제목 | Dancing | 등록일 | 2014-10-06 |
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내용 | I have several experiences in dancing. The most pleasant experience was company talent show for the year end party. I recruited two members and we choose Korean girl group's dance music. I recommended my members to download the original vedio from the internet and watching it. We didn't have enough time for the practice, also we should learn it ourselves. I watched the video more than 1 month and paused it several times for learning the body motion. Sometimes, we practised togather in small empty room in the company, after finishing our work. It was really enjoyable time. 2 weeks prior to the show, we bought dancing clothes which look like animals. Our show was really great, and all of employees were cheering us. Also we won the prize. Many people were suprised our girl group dancing, because our characteristic was gentle and meek. After the year end party, we had one more chance to dance in front of global engineering team. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-08 |
첨삭 내용 | I have several experiences in dancing. The most pleasant experience was MY company'S talent show for OUR |