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제목 Neighborhood 등록일 2014-10-07
내용 "Neighborhood"
Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back late at night. Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often. And each household of my apartment is quite segregated, we seldom meet my neigbors. Sometimes I meet them during the elevator ride. Even I don't realize who are they, they realize me, "say hello". In that case, I was just embarrasing, "say hello" in return.
When I was young, I lived in a detached house. At that time I remembered several neighbors. I even remember some of their faces now. I miss that time, my neighbors meet together.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-07
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"Neighborhood"

Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back late at night. FOR THIS REASON, I don't see my neighbors often. And Each household of my apartment COMPLEX (OR BUILDING) is SECTIONED OFF IN SUCH A WAY, THAT quite segregated, we seldom HAVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO meet my neigHbors. FREQUENTLY OF COURSE, Sometimes I meet them during the elevator ride. Even AS I don't realize who are they ARE, they realize RECOGNIZE me, AND GREET ME WITH "HELLO!" "say hello". In that case I was just SO embarrasing, I RETURN THEIR GREETING LIKEWISE "say hello" in return. When I was young, I lived in a detached house. At that time I remembered several neighbors. I even remember some of their faces now. I miss that time, my neighbors meet together.

 

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