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제목 Cooking1 등록일 2014-10-13
내용 I have a big interest in cooking, but I didn't put it into action until now. Because kitchen is owned by my mother, and because I don't want to make it a mess and because it's hard to find the right cooker for the right food in her dominion.
So, the only case that I cook in her kitchen is when I make a simple cook like a instand noodle.
But there's a case that I cook, intentionally or not intentionally, when I go to camping outside.
In general, The receipies are also consist of instant foods, but when there are some people who can have a drink with me, I make a small appetizer, named 'Oyster seasoned paprica onion sausage'.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-10-16
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I have a big interest in cooking, but I didn't HAVEN'T put it into action until now. Because kitchen is owned by my mother IS THE BOSS OF HER KITCHEN, and because I don't want to make it a mess and I OFTEN FIND IT DIFFULT because it's hard to find the right cooKER for the right food in her dominion. So, the only case that I cook in her kitchen is when I make a simple cook like a instand INSTANT noodle. But there's a case that I cook, intentionally or not intentionally, when I go to camping. outside. In general, The receipies are also consist of instant foods, but when there are some people who can have a drink with me, I make a small appetizer, named 'Oyster seasoned papriKa onion sausage'.

 

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