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제목 Unit 11 등록일 2014-10-14
내용 I usually take a rest on weekend. It is very important for me because I feel happiness. On weekend, I can read books and do my another work that I really like. Many people in Korea go to work on weekend. I think it is a big problem because they don't have a time that they can use for their happiness. Many old people in Korea still think working for a long time can achieves good results. I totally don't agree that. It is another hell to everyone.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-14
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I usually take a rest on weekendS. It is very important for me because I feel happY iness. On weekendS, I can read books and do my another work that I really like. Many people in Korea go to work on weekendS. I think it is a big problem because they don't have a time that they can use for their happiness. Many old people in Korea still think working for a long time can achieves good results. I totally don't DISagree WITH that. It is JUST another hell to everyone!

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