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제목 | Listen to Music | 등록일 | 2014-10-17 |
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내용 | There are so many groups and single singers in Korea, so I cannot distinguish who is who. But I like some singers such as Mr. Cho Yong-Pil. He was not one of the most popular youngsters, but one of the most popular stars dozens of years ago. I think his song is romantic and has a passion, vigor and soul. I recall some girl group who were famous dozens of years ago. In these days there are many famous Korean girl groups and boy groups singing and dancing. There are called K-Pop stars. Many teenager young K-Pop stars are not only famous in Asian Countries like Japan, China, Philiphine but also famous in all over the world. This symptom is called "Hanryu". I don't know why other countries' people like their songs and performances. I think their services are not only made of Korean origin but also a mixture of global one, so their values are globalized. |
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담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-10-20 |
첨삭 내용 | There are so many groups and single singers in Korea, so I cannot distinguish who is who, but I like some singers such as Mr. Cho Yong-Pil. He was not one of the most popular youngsters, but one of the most popular stars dozens of years ago. I think his songS ***ALVIN -- YOU WILL NOTE THAT I ADDED AN INFUSION OF VOCABULARY (BY USING THE THESAURUS) ... TO FURTHER EXPRESS YOUR THEME. ALTOGETHER, VERY WELL UNDERSTOOD! |